Thursday, January 28, 2010

Happy 3rd Birthday My Daughter Sayings My First Poem Its For My Daughters Memorieal Please Help.?

My first poem its for my daughters memorieal please help.? - happy 3rd birthday my daughter sayings

This is my first poem to his daughter, who died a year ago. We make a statue for his birthday and I wanted to read a poem. Suggestions and proposals for the most important would be perfect.

Calls in the sky

Hello God
my little angel is not
I want to say hello
and the time is always so clear

Hello God
my little angel is not
I want to say happy birthday 3
and I miss them

Hello God
my little angel is not
You want your
and say that its ok

Hello Mommys Little Angel finally here.

8 comments:

giveitmy... said...

Sorry for your loss. His poem was heartwrenching. Tell me if you like these changes at all? I hope you do!

Hello God
This is my little angel?
I would say, 'Good Morning'
and the time is unclear.

Hello God
This is my little angel?
I would say, "third anniversary"
I have missed during the year.

Hello God
This is my little angel?
I want to send my love,
and I have my sweet darling.

Hello Little Angel
No reason to cry.
Mom is now
Clear all tears from their eyes.

Please note that not cry your little angel. Those she left behind mourning. Oh, what we do! But it is in heaven with God! More tears for them! While forgetting its high price, please remember that it does not really want to leave! You will always, but not in this form. God Bless!

My dear child,
Morgan Elizabeth Gracen
as long as Iand your face
They feel touch
his warm embrace.
One
can replace that
Their presence here.
I miss you so.
Oh, why did God
I had to go?
She was my angel
my daughter
my heart, my soul.
She was my world.
Now she's gone,
I must mourn.
The pain never stops.
I'm broken inside.
I pray to God
to exceed in any way,
live, love and laugh again
than I would have ever met.

Applecru... said...

Omg When I looked at a "happy birthday 3", I cried, not even know your daughter and you will find in the beautiful heart. And the day I know she is from heaven and smile when you listen. I want to help, write a poem, but since I do not know your baby angel I think it would be wrong to wear a special message to your special girl.

but remember shes safe

God bless

luvpink said...

How about this -----

Hello God
This is my little angel?
I say "Hello"
And softly a little prayer

Hello God
This is my little angel?
I want to say happy birthday 3
And as I'm bored here

Hello God
This is my little angel?
I long to remain as close to
And to say that your care

Hello Little Angel, the mother to be there one days

Doc said...

As a father of two girls, I can not imagine your pain. Sorry for your loss. Your poem is perfect, her words, thoughts and desires, so do not think anyone can add anything or think you should change something. Y Truley touching and I thank you for shareing.

God bless you and your family
May God grant you and your family the strength to continue

doc

Charles said...

Wow, it's so sad and beautiful. It is not easy to read, as I am sure you are aware of. Do not change it, or in any way. It's really nice.

I hope you find peace. I pray for you. God bless you.

sophia said...

What is beautiful

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omg that is beautiful.

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omg that is beautiful.

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